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OMG!!! A CLIFFY?!?!?! it was so interesting and you stoped it! *sniff* I love your story it's very realistic and I just can't get enough of it... you need to update ASAP!!! preaty please! ^_^ your a very very talented writer please continue!

~*InuyashasGurl008*~

I just thought I'd tell you that I really love your story! I've been reading it since you posted your first chapter, but I thought I'd post to give you a little boost... maybe a boost to make chapters faster? Hey, it was worth a shot. Well anyways, I love the story line and I can't wait to read how Kagome is going to react to Kouga's proposal. Don't leave us in the dark long...

Please please please update!!! Your story's awesome but you can't let Kagome end up with Kouga! He's as conniving as Kikyou! Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!

This is sooo great I'm loving it even more with every new chr. r. Please add more chapters really soon I can't wait to read more.

OMG! You are soooo evil! I am in love with this story. Love it, love it bad. Keep updating, por favor! Gracias.

OMG You NEED to continue please update! It got so interesting and you left it on a cliffy!!! I hate those grrrr. but great story please update pretty please!!!

This story is getting better and better with every chapter. Though I wish the you haden't left us standing at this part. I must say though that your spelling has improved remarkably and for that I am greatful, it makes bet better reading that way. Please add more chapters real soon I can't wait to read on.

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i think your fic is really great the plot is interesting i was wondering did you post this at mediaminer.org because ithink ive read this before there and im on the chapter where kikyou(is a slut) is dissapionted cause kag didnt dance with kouga i dont think kik is worth calling a bitch because it means a female dog (so thats why inu keeps calling kagome a bitch because kag is his woman or bitch) hahahahah

This is a great story and I was wondering if it was a kag/koga or kag/inu pairing type story. One piece of advice though, as I was reading I have notice A LOT of spelling errors. You might want to use a spell check program while writing the next chapters out or atleast have someone read your story before you post it and they can make the corrections for you. I find when I read stories I quickly loose interest in it and stop reading if there are a continous amout of errors and it is not being fixed. a few errors are dismissable but when It becomes ongoing through out the entire story people lose intrest. Pleaslve lve this problem and that would make your story even better. I'm looking forward to reading more, like I sbefobefore it is a great story so far you just need to watch your spelling mistakes. please add more chapters soon I'll be waiting to read them.