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for Wish Upon a Star

by InuyashasNaughtyGurl

person amber
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gotta make more long chappys. read through that in about 5 mins.
person laura aka gittelbug
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting you can do alot wiht this story. update soon.
person shaina
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome. Everything is going her way.
person ME
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far!! It'll be fun to see what happens next--update soon!!
person Interested Reader
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm curious. Please continue with your story!
person Staind
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I like the story line so far. I can't wait to see all the little things that are different in this modern world. I love the fact that all her friends and Inuyasha are there, but does that mean all the bad people are going to be there as well? There's many ways to with on this one. For instance, does Inuyasha and them know she has miko powers? UmmWellWell write another chapter ASAP, alright?!
person laura
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
weird. but good
person Mystyfied3
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story has got some really good potential... keep it up. i wanna know how their relationship is going to end up, or how it's going to start... whichever you choose. that being said i have a suggestion... i dunno about other reviews given or recieved in the past but i'm a bit of a perfectionist.ase ase do paragraphs. i will try have more bits of into to hopefully help u out in the future, but for now this is your creative hitch and i wanna see how you're going to do this. can't wait. lots of luck and ideas to you. Mysty-chan

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