rate_review Reviews

another beautifully written chapter. Inu's emotions pour through your words so easily - wow! you described naraku's defeat at kagome's hands so eloquently. so now we know what Inu's wish was...but how is that she was given a body while he remains a spirit? am looking forward to finding out...

I'm always on the lookout for good Inu-Kag fanfics, so I thought I'd try yours out :)

Your first chapter is so beautifully written - the expression of feelings, the imagery, and the mood are haunting...fitting for a story where Inu is "haunting" Kag.

Just b/c I'm a terrible and hopeless romantic, I have to ask...is there any way that your story will allow Inu-Kag to be reunited physically at the end (dunno how..magic? reincarnation? afterlife?)? It's fine if that's not where you're going with this; I'm just curious so I can keep tissues nearby when I read (total dork, but I feel after *everything* those two go through, karma should allow them a happy ending) :)

I take it that we're going to get a retrospective storytelling about how things have come to be the way they are...and it will be interesting reading from Inu's point of view...since you're giving him a chance to actually express himself beyond the "keh" and "feh"...

I'm looking forward to your next update...and finding out more about which direction you're heading in. :)