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for The Bear Trap

by Atropa

person InkiKokoro
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Eye of Ra, nothing wrong with perversion if it involves Naraku and Sesshoumaru. *licks lips*
The only critisism I would have for your stories is maybe to make a few that didn't involve love.
Sometimes you just need a good fuck, no strings attached. ;)
person KuwaLove
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I loved it! I love fluff and it was defintly fluffy! Excellent job!
person The Empress
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet, another fascinating story. I loved it. You rock! ^_^
person PrincessLemon
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am highly pleased with this story, you did a wonderful job and I look forward to seeing more of your wokr in the future.
I tip my crown to you *bows*
person AJAngelique
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps and cheers wildly*
That was wonderful! Absolutly, positivly wonderful!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I guess your done, but it would be nice to give it another chapter
person Kit-chan
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont really care for sesshomaru or naraku but this fic was so interesting that i just had to review

^_^ ehe heheh good job! I liked it lots! (even though i'm a bigger fan of sango/inuyasha and sango/kouga)

^_^ I love all ur works!

wouldnt it be cool if you tried writing a kouga/sango fic? (HINT HINT) (i'm so bad ^^;;; and shameless)
person Anonymous
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At 1:00 this morning, I find the first half to what seems to be an interesting story, but only one chapter. 3:00 I came back to the page it was on and I see I'm not the only one up late. And boy am I ever glad. If you don't mind me saying so, that was a very good lemPervPerverted yes, but well written. I thought that making Sess and Naruku brothers was a very cive ive idea. And I agree with your 'comrads,' there don't seem to be many Sess/Nar/San fanfics out there. I wonder why?
person CWolf
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! So much hottness. Great work!
person nutmeg
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Can't say it any other way but that I loved it. lol

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