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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start...I'm happy you posted your work here. The only thing I would point out is to put the description of the main characters in the first few paragraphs, so we can get a better picture of what Kaitlyne looks like. Other than that, I like it very much.
JA,
Gia
JA,
Gia