rate_review Reviews

hey totally awsome story cant wait to see an update...*_*

I always thougt that Virgin Sex slaves were worth more.
well a pity.

HI, Kagome! I wanted to tell you that I enjoyed the first chapter of your story, I think it has a good plotline, and it could get very interesting. I found that this first chapter was a bit rushed, however. I mean, it seemed like you wanted to get a lot of things into it, and didn't go into details, especially about the transformation Kagome suffers, her feelings, etc. Maybe you should try to develop that part a little bir more. I hope you don't mind my telling you this, after all, it's only my opinion, the stoy is your's! ^_^ You choose wether you pay heed or not ;) Other than that, I'm looking forward to finding out what will be happening soon ;)

Kag/Inu, but I'll accept Koug/Kag, Sess/Kag, Hiten/Kag,or something not already oJustJust make it good.