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Please finish this story. And please have Inuyasha come back some how.

Okay....my friend Satu & I [Brea] fully agree...and this story...sucked....

And....I'm not that picky of a reader, but:
a) beta, badly needed: we're not even going to read the other chapters...
b) um....from reading a TON of yaoi daily, and writing our own: we know it is a BAD idea 9/10 times to write in first person.
c) Satu: I can't believe people actually like it...
d) Brea: ummmm male preg....is really gross....I've only read ONE fanfiction that did not suck, but it was never posted.
e) Rose *randomly appears out of no where*: ummm let's keep the preg to the women...that's what we're here for.
f) Maria-lyn *randomly from couch*: I WANT GOOD YAOI DAMNIT!
g) Allison *pointing to computer and bossy like rambling so fast Brea cannot type fast enough*: [slow ver] Stay awake in english class....please....
h) Beckah: Get some history [Satu & Brea: on what?!]
i) FIND BETA!!!
j) GET A GAY BFF! [Satu: send me fruit basket]
k) We mean...it was a good plot an stuff, but....we don't know...just :/....

i´m glad sessy has found someone new, though i´m a bit puzzled - why hasn´t he simply used tessaiga on inu? but o.k...otherwise, i´m dead curious about what will happen with the pups, especially cause the legend mentioned only two and the third is a hanyou

Ahhhh, I am so sad. I had been a while since you updated and I was so excited because I thought that you would bring InuYasha back. They got to spend so little time together after he wasn't a secret anymore and they were able to have a normal life together. And then Sessh was gone because of the war before the pups were born, and that was time lost to them. I'm so, so, so incredibly sad. I wouldn't tell you to bring him back, it's your story, but I still wish you had. Poor Inu. Poor pups. Poor Sesshy. I don't know where you plan on taking this, how long it will be, if you have planned it all out etc... but if you're going kill a main character (I think you shouldn't have), it's my opinion that it should happen at the end (at least that's usually how it goes in movies, books, manga's, etc... for main characters). It's too hard at least for me as a reader and I think probably for a lot of other readers as well to get used to a main character, become endeared to their character, and then have them die, and the story continue.
I'm not trying to be mean or a jerk, I hope you didn't think so, and this is not a flame. I don't want you to take what I'm saying the wrong way. It really is a good well written story, it has a great plot, and it's creatie and dfferent, and I loved all of it until you killed Inu off. I'm still interested to see what happens, although it is heart wrenching to read after he dies, I just can't stop thinking about him.

I like the story but have some corrections
chap1 - it's not soup(thats what you eat) its soap
- and it's presence not presents

ok why did you kill inuyasha what the hell is up with that.

I think that was cruel how you made Inuyasha die and not see his pups grow up as well as sesshoumaru look for another you should of made sesshoumaru use his sword to save Inuyasha. I mean it is the sword to bring back the dead is it not? well besides that i hope you write a lot more chapter ja ne

I agree with finding a way to get Inuyasha back (one can only hope). Whatever happens though I'll still be looking forward to the new updates, great story!

Why did you let Inuyasha die? Why didn't you just have Sesshomaru bring him back with the sword of healing?

aww im glad to see you updates but sad to see that Inuyasha really did die! I wasnt expecting that! I hope you make a twist where he will come back in some way or something. Great update though!