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OOOO WOOT! Im loving this story... i seem to like the storys that have the long plots like this.... you should read Kagome's Blood... its a good story, its over 70 chapters, but damn its so good! lol, i like your story alot, and i hope you update soon!

nstorstory. keep going

Excell work on thanfianfiction i started readin yesterday and cant so please write chpt 8 soon im just goin to die if i dont
ps. keep up the good work

gasp! i wonder how kag will take it? well she i think knew he was a hanyo so pretty well...goody they might be a couple! hehe ya update sooon! plz...i want to c how their relationship goes...adios

Wow this is soo really good, i can't believe how good it is, i just hope you don't forget to update soon!!
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Damn! Come on! It was gettin' good again! I hope Kagome doesn't scream. That'd be bogus. Okay, I guess I'll be patient. This is an excellent story. Please keep writing.

You know... when you spoke of that little Hanyou... automatically I saw a little Inuyasha- you know that scene with him looking back at you with a red ball in his hands? Yea.. automatically I saw that -without the ball- looking at them in the streets with that sad look on his face, but it didn't really look anime-ish. It looked like the cruel world in the city with a heart broken child abused and neglected. I know you described him to have red hair and to be a fox ^_~ but before you described him I saw little Inuyasha... and I don't normally get that colorful of a image in my mind reading a fic. I give you a very big congrats on your writing ability. You have true talent. Keep up your good work.

**blinks** ahhhh!!! I really have to say, were I Kagome, I probably would have just left, instead of retreating to Sango's room. ^_^ Naughty place to leave it though, naughty!! Keep up the good work, your story's great so far!

Ahhh! Cliffhanger! Nuuuu! >_< Please update soon, I'll die if you don't XD Hehe.. I suppose.. I get into this fic... a bit.. too much.. hehe...

But it's really, really good ^___^ Please keep it up :)

R: "duuuuuuude....saucy!"

Z: "..."

R: "Wish Inu would stop f-ing up though..."

Z: "..."

R: "Well come on man! Say something." *Types away as Zee lies like a slug on a nearby couch, straining ears for responses.*

Z: "uhhhhh."

R: "That's right. Just one big ugh! Ive been reading this to her ever since she sprawled out on the couch. Note to self - Be careful the next time be go out to eat. She tends to underestimate her immunities to alcohol and certain foods. *smirks* You should have seen her when we got out of there. The funniest damn thing I ever saw!!!"

Z: "..."

R: "Well I like it altho I wish they would get together already!!! Come on! I cant stand all the torture. It's like watching chicken and potatoes, you just got to wait for the gravy to pour in. MMM...saucy!"

Z: "Tell them that if they are going through all this torture, we better get one hell of a bang soon!"

R: "Yeah man, you tell off those perogees (How the hells ons one spell that? I'd ask Zee but she's in swirlyland)

Z: "Yay"

R: "Anyways, would Inu just play around with a friend like that. An ego like that is a really big kick in the head. Please don't cliff us again! This time I fell like im gonna fall into a sea of snake heads and I'm the extra sauce! The best part of every meal in my opinion. uh, Spongebob.........nitemares....

Z: "Be nice R*beep*

R: "Cant let anybody know that! I'm ready baby!"

*takes a sledgehammer and waits *patiently* for Leafy's signal to charge the Writer's block, the little light on helmet flickering repeatedly*

Z: "..."

R: "Don't scare us like that again, thank you!"

Z: "???"

R: "Sorry if we're not sane. Continue on and we're praying for progress if you know my meaning.

Z: "Smut!"

R: "??? She didn't mean that."

Z: "Mean what? Write more andl bel be better next time...I hope."