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by Elysant

person Adina
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You ROCK Your the best i love the way u update fast and they are super long chapters u have such a great talent for writing keep it up. ill keep reading and reviewing. Bye! -Adina
person Platinum
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPPIE EVER!!! I so knew that Kagome was going to be left out but i doubted and wante to make sure you'd put that in but then i thought 'nah thats whats going to happen anyways!' but i what really caught me off gaurd was the fthatthat Inu would reveal himself to her that fast bt then again it was probably jsut an accident. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! AS SOON AS KAGS STARTED TO CRY I WAS SO DYING TO READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!
person ZoZe
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woaaaahh! Amazing fic!
I wasn't able to stop reading it. Now that I've just finished the 7th chapter it is half past 4 in the morning!
Although I'll die without coffee today, I would like to read more soon! :-)
person MyOwnHappyEnding (not logged on)
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK GOD! well...actually Thank you! I was hoping they would get pass this Priestess/Hanyou thingy...now he will finally know.....let's all hope that nothing goes wrong...w I a I am assuming is going to happen...*Sighs* Love the chapter!
person Opheila
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooo damn mean!!!! grrr i hat cliffys lol
person Anonymous
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it's very good I can't wait to read the next chapter Your grammar and spelling are very good this fic is very very good and trust me I have read alot of fics please update soon thanks!
DB
person aish
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. cant wait for the next chapter =).
person Mija
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ya know Ive been reading the last 7 chaps for two hours and now you leave it at a cliffy???? sniffles and wants to tear her hair out...and by this I mean mine lol....but I really like this story and please dont aske why it took me 2 hours to read 7 chaps k??? brain dead here lol, anyhow love the fic and I wants more please please please update k??? pretty please?? much huggles and thanks and smiles MIja...:-)
person szmadad
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good gods! Please update soon! You ended that last chapter in a way that just has me begging to find out what goes on next!
Again, I've got to tell you that I'm so stuck on your story. You're doing such a great job fleshing out charcharacters, their feelings and motivations. Nothing feels rushed...although I'm dying for Inu and kag to get together...your pace is great. After all, things can't happen overnight...the intense attraction is there...but the feelings and actions are all building.

Again, can't wait to read what happens next now that Inu has revealed himself to Kags. I want him to realize that she's known he's a hanyou all along...
person drake220
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you updated! hurray! very good chapter eve though I do think that kag is investing waaaay too much emotional energy into some guy she's never met. it always pisses me off when girls do that. its like, calm down! he barely knows you! but it was a good chapter with a cliffy! fun fun! update soon!

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