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August 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start. Please come back and finish it
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far, you should continue to update this story here..
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good, however, you had a few spelling errors. Also, if the story is rated PG-13, then why put it on AFF.Net? If you want more people to see it, then go to Mediaminer.org or Fandomination.net.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so r u going to update or not? I'm getting kinda impaitent. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So what's Going to happen?!
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like how this is going...
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update fast its good so far