rate_review Reviews

Yes, yes! I liked it. You did not make him all soft and mushy like some writers do. That's exactly how the real Naraku would behave.

wow naraku is disgusting and i really like great writing despite the evil ending

dame you cant just stop there >:[

WOW!! i felt so sorry for kagome narku is such an a**. Anywaz i liked how you wrote the lemon or rape w.e!!

i love it. but it shude not be a one-shot.

good story next chapi

It was wild!

GOD BLESS YOU.....
WRITE MORE NARAKU RAPING KAGOME!!!!!! OR AT LEAST TELL ME ANY FICS YOU KNOW....

Wow.... Didn't expect that... the body soul everything. You'll be mine because the baby thing, but it was good!
Nice lemon. I dont know what you think about writing.... rape and stuff, but I like reading its. yes I know, how
perverted is that? Sick? Twisted? Kitty? lol yeah.

Good job. I'm glad you're not adding more. I think its good as a one shot. Lets your readers come up with
something on their own. As for me, I wont dwell on it too long, cuz i got more lemony rape to read and also
some to write... my fics can wait right? lol

laters
signed bad author

this was really very good. I know you aren't going to write mor but it seems such a same not to put your obvious talent to use on this story. I really loved it and I think you are an excellent author.