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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, lovely quicky. I like how Shippo has been incorporated and that his behaviour reflects his loss. Only prob I found was that you start calling Souta Kota and Kouta. Very confusing, I thought there was a new character for a moment. You may want to edit that.
Keep up the great work!!
Keep up the great work!!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying reading this. It does have some spelling errors though & you have Souta as Kouta again in at least the last half of chapter 7. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great please update
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated!!!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great chapter. and good lemon. id say make the lemon more streached out. put more foreplay in it. otherthan that i like it. please update soon thanx
Jake.
Jake.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter...I await the next one
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I don't normally like it when it's reading from someone's point of view. I dunno, just don't like it. But listen here, I like this one...at first when I noticed I was like 'i'm not reading this', but I ended up scanning the chapter, then reading and now I'm hooked. okay? so you have to update soon.
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update the next chapter faster!
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN SINCE YOU UPDATED?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Hurry up, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Oh, and more Inu/Kag romance please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Hurry up, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Oh, and more Inu/Kag romance please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Are you alive?! GOD! Will you update?!