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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. It was one of the best stories i have read. Great details. and i love how Inuyasha and Kagome ended up together. Bravo.
(((Claps hands and bows))))
(((Claps hands and bows))))
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Well, the story is nice, but you really need to work on your sentence structure. There were run-on sentences all over the place, punctuation errors--it made it a bit difficult to really get into the story. As I said, though, I like the story. Just work a bit on your grammar, and you're gonna be just fine. ^_^