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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely fantastic story...you really did a great job handling the matter of mortality, and I loved the three different perspectives on the goings-on...Ah-un's section was particularly humorous. Thanks for yet another fabulous fic. :)
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is absolutely amazing. I have never read a story with that much work! It was great to read a story such as this one. I usually write and see Sess/Rin stories that deal with a lot of OOC but this one seemed to be right on the money. You konw? Well, great job on this.
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was soo good and cute and sad. I liked the ending quote it fits in nicely.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful, well written love story. I was so impressed with the weaving in and out of the events. Wonderful, I so enjoy your work! I am slowly reading my way through all of it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(sniffles.) SAD!!!! (Sniff) very good, I have never read a story from Ah-Un's POV before. Very nice.
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowies. O_o I sat here and nearly cried over Jaken. This is very, very well written, very descriptive. I love the use of Ah and Un's point of view, I've never seen that done before. Can't wait for the next update!
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No there are no happy endings, but your are a wonderful writer. I was touched by the first chapter with Ah-Un. their POV was so cute. This last chapter was bittersweet. I really enjoyed this because it made me feel. Any story can can rise up that kind of emotion, to me is a good story. Keep on writing Maven.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The best compliment I can give this story is also the truest....I cried. And I never do that. Thank you.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed and feel so moved by your work, I cant even express myself. You should take immense pridethisthis story, I only wish it was something you could publish to share with a wider audience.
Be sure I will tell everyone I know about this story. Thank you for sharing it.
Be sure I will tell everyone I know about this story. Thank you for sharing it.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... this story is just so incredibly touching and beautiful. i almost never cry but this brought me to tears. i don't really know what else to say. just absolutely beautiful...