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for Sloppy Seconds

by CutiePieHentai

person Cassi
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love your story! (Not just saying for ego boost... lol) Keep up the great work & PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I LOVE how you have actually made Miroku seem honorable (it's a first...), and I have never thought of IY being easily embarassed, but it works... Keep it up!
<3 Cassi
person Yume
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!!! this is sooooooooooooooo awsome!!! i feel like i'm in it.. ur really REALLY good
person kinky again
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, i love this story and all the great kinky-ness that i can get from it, but this is utter torture! i've been checking every night before i go to bed to see if you have updated. i can't take the suspense. i need a new chapter! if i don't get one, i'll go insane! i know i will. i can feel it in me bones! (frowns) won't you please, oh please, update soon? i need to know what happens! i need to know if kag and sango are going to go at it together with a peeping pair or if they are going to go at each other with a peeping pair! (that would be even better, ne?)

anyway, before my hentai mind leaks onto the computer, great job with the chapters and update soon, ne?

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Poor Miroku.....I don't think he's going to be able to resist Sango next time...;D
person Ralina
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!! Oh please keep updating. You've got a great plot, kept with the original storyline, kept the characters in their own worlds, and stayed true to the characters at the same time. I don't think that scene with Miroku and Sango was out of character at all. It eventually has to happen one way or another and that is a very possible way it could happen. I think you are very gifted and you should keep writing - and not just fanfiction. I'm sure that you could be a very sucessful author in your own right. Give yourself a pat on the back and please keep updating! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

*Ralina*
P.S. Thank you for sharing with us that music video. I loved it!
person kyle
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its great keep writing but please when u get a new chapter would u email it to me please
person shaina
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really love this story! I can't wait to read more and to find out what happens between inuyasha and kagome. I hope that baka will confess his love for kagome before I smack one of his ears. More soon please.
person Valeron
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great it is great i cant wait dor the next update. i hope it is soon.
person Spud
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The review buttons are working again, so I'm gonna put 'em to good use. That chappie was really great! Now it's starting to get hot. *shuffles toward you* How many chapters before the lemon??? *shuffles foreward again* Huh??? TELL ME!! *cough* Excuse me. As you can see, I'm anxious. PLEASE make the lemon as soon as you can! *backs off* No, you do it as soon as you want to. But keep in mind my state of insanity... *evil grin* x_x
person kinky hanyou-elf
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are they going to go at it solo?! (lecherous grin) i wonder how sango will respond to the information about masturbation and all of it's wonderful qualities! ^.^

but, anyway, i have to say, inuyasha in leather would be a fine sight to see! ^.^ i love a woman in leather... and would totally make an exception for inuyasha... or sesshoumaru! (growl!)

anlovelove the whole fighting with kagome makes him horny! that's great! i would have never thought about that but the way you explained it makes perfect sense!

great job (how's this for a little ego stroking?)

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

(lemons soon! onegai...)

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