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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2
That's not the end is it? That was awesome. Best scene I've read in a while! Can't wait for more if there is some.
That's not the end is it? That was awesome. Best scene I've read in a while! Can't wait for more if there is some.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have only one word or sound to make in respond to this story. Awwnnnn!
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far.
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, i must say that i could dream of something that kinky! i love that the whole dream became a semi-reality. although i would love to see a full-blown lemon between the twoam qam quite alright with what's happened so far. the semi-lemon is good and i can't wait for more! update quickly, i need more!
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!!!!!!!! I just read the second chapter and it was worth the wait. Totally mind blowing. Please write more soon!!!!!!
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, their supposed to have sex, not do themselve's. Hurry and put the correct stuff up!
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LoVe It.!!! ReViEw So0n!!! PlEaSe!!! =D
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You need to post the next chapter soon. I dying to find out what happen next! PLEASE SOON!!!!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was pretty damn good, loved the ending... hope the second chapter will be out soon!
- Zelix, A.K.A "The King of plots", "God of Lemons" and "Prince of OC characters" LOL.
- Zelix, A.K.A "The King of plots", "God of Lemons" and "Prince of OC characters" LOL.
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think u should add more..its pretty good