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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so citrus isn't your strong point. Don't sweat it. Though depending on how long you want this fic to be you may want to have a beta reader assist you - at least on the lemons. I don't know how your writing style is, so its hardly my place to say. Other than that, you have apretty good story going. Keep it up!
Fairia
Fairia
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still all about beating IY senseless though. Honestly, Kag's has been his best friend for HOW LONG? And his mate besides? He should trust her by NOW...
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love ur story a lot plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More steamy shower sex, please. I adore this fic. It stabs you in the heart one moment and caresses your hair the next. It really pulls at your heartstrings. I love it.
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh cliff hangers! very good story!! good work so far ;)
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is ey ony one of the best fan fics I have read of Inuyasha. Please continue. I am so in love with this story I can't wait for you to continue. Please update asap!!! Thank you for writing this story.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there...this is szmadad...I finally came up with a user name so I could post my own fic on this site :)
You definitely ended things with a cliffy...eek...I'm just DYING to hear Inuyasha's side of things. I mean, really dying! The explanation better be a darn good one for all that kagome has gone through. However, it seems that Inuyasha has definitely been suffering as well...
Thanks for putting some lime into things; it's good to see that the attraction...the feelings are still there for *both* of them. But you know, a straight up lemon - while wonderful (after all, we're all just a wee bit hentai here, right?) - would probably not have been appropriate...so don't feel bad for not putting it in there. Too much hurt, too much misunderstanding. I mean, you can't have amazing makeup sex after two years of absolutely NO contact without there being some sort of explanation of things first.
And we need to find out creepy Naraku's role in everything. Hmm...maybe we can have the amazing makeup sex before that though, after Inu has his say. Gotrewareward us all, ne?
:)
You definitely ended things with a cliffy...eek...I'm just DYING to hear Inuyasha's side of things. I mean, really dying! The explanation better be a darn good one for all that kagome has gone through. However, it seems that Inuyasha has definitely been suffering as well...
Thanks for putting some lime into things; it's good to see that the attraction...the feelings are still there for *both* of them. But you know, a straight up lemon - while wonderful (after all, we're all just a wee bit hentai here, right?) - would probably not have been appropriate...so don't feel bad for not putting it in there. Too much hurt, too much misunderstanding. I mean, you can't have amazing makeup sex after two years of absolutely NO contact without there being some sort of explanation of things first.
And we need to find out creepy Naraku's role in everything. Hmm...maybe we can have the amazing makeup sex before that though, after Inu has his say. Gotrewareward us all, ne?
:)
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
POST MORE CHPPYS DAMNIT!!!! or... CHINESE WATER TORTURE *Muhahahahahahahahaha*.... please?
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahah!!
Naraku *is* a sneaky bastard! I'm still confused about the plot that he cooked up and the reasoning behind it. And then there's Inu-Kag...gosh, they really have a lot of stuff to hash out. Again, it's good Inu wasn't cheating on Kagome but he lied to her about working late at the office and then he was caught red handed with a suggestively dressed Kikyo. What can he honestly expect kagome to think?
And then there's poor Kagome who's been sort of brainwashed into feeling even more insecure about her place in Inu's heart and the comparison to Kikyo.
But still..even if it is an outlet for pentup emotions, please let Inu-Kag have the lemon. Let the act reaffirm something between them on an unconscious level.
Again, your writing is wonderful and I can't wait to read the update.
Naraku *is* a sneaky bastard! I'm still confused about the plot that he cooked up and the reasoning behind it. And then there's Inu-Kag...gosh, they really have a lot of stuff to hash out. Again, it's good Inu wasn't cheating on Kagome but he lied to her about working late at the office and then he was caught red handed with a suggestively dressed Kikyo. What can he honestly expect kagome to think?
And then there's poor Kagome who's been sort of brainwashed into feeling even more insecure about her place in Inu's heart and the comparison to Kikyo.
But still..even if it is an outlet for pentup emotions, please let Inu-Kag have the lemon. Let the act reaffirm something between them on an unconscious level.
Again, your writing is wonderful and I can't wait to read the update.