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Dare I say that this story gets better with each chapter? Yes! I dare, I dare! I thouroughly enjoyed that little encounter between Kagome and her dashing hero and I really enjoyed the banter between Kouga and Inuyasha--definitely want to see more of both. I am split on how Kagome's character is being handled, though: part of me enjoys that she's on the Hanyou's side (yeah, there's gonna be little debates between her and her partner--wonder who he's gonna be???), but another part was wishing that there'd be more...tension between them, that she wouldn't be on his side, but then again, wouldn't really be against him. It would make the "courtship" between the 2 just that much more interesting. But, its your story, and its prolly was too late to make changes.
And now, I'm going back to read Chapter 3 again...heeheehee....

i enjopyed the chpater. it is great. and i know who kogas partner is. but damn i hate him. lol. kill him off in theis story please.i want to see him dead in one story at least. lol. please update soon.

No, no, no, no! You better not be planning on being a bastard and letting me hang from this oh-so-delightful cliffie you have created! This chapter was great!! Believe me, I was bouncing around in my chair in a display of joy when I saw that you had updated this interesting story! Keep up the good work!

Hi, Like before i like it, and to me it just keeps getting better. Who getiing Kissed!!!!!!!!!!?????? I want to know you better tell me *glaring and shaking fist*. Haha just kidding, i won't yot you. But please post more soon. I can't wait to read it

*Raises eyebrows* My, they're quite strongly attracted to each other on a first meeting.( But that certainly is a good thing)
How can you end it like that and tell me theres a kiss in the next chapter???!!! I wanna see it now!!!!
Anyway, did you purposely switch things around by making the human Inuyasha dislike the demon part? Cos its usually the other way round.
Yes, I certainly enjoyed their meeting especially with the electrifying atmosphere. Looking forward to more action next chapter!!!
PLease Please PLleas and PLease place more chapters on!!!!!!

its awsome im glad its not your useuall story line. and not your useuall superhero story past thing. i like it alot. its awsome. plz update soon. thanx.

Yes, I did enjoy this chapter, and I didn't find it boring at all--its called "character developement" and is a very good factor in good stories, so keep that stuff up! Let's see...what else...? Ah, yes, you pretty much passed the biology exam (I have Bachelor's in Biology, so I tend to be a little picky on this kinda thing...), especially the mitosis junk, well as much as I can remember anyway... :D And why the hell can't I ever wake up to find that (Inuyasha) in my bed?!?? That would QUICKLY turn me into a morning person!
One bit of advice though: I caught a few spelling errors, and some possible missing words, so I suggest you get your hands on a beta reader (hell, I'LL do it if you can't find anybody), or go through your works with a fine-tooth comb before submitting any updates. A story could be Pulitzer worthy, but if it has too many errors, its pretty much flushable.
May the muses bless you!

This is great, you certainly update faster than most people! (So is it really gonna be daily!!??)
I'm being honest here, the chapter was NOT boring,founfound it facinating how you went into all that biological decription of Inu's transformation. God, I almost died reading through his 26 year old phyisque.
Yipppeeee!! Kagome is in the next chapter!!!!
By the way, is Kikyo the one who broke his heart??? (Sorry to say, but I don't like her at all)

No no it's not boring at all. I love it . Please write more s!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i must say these 2 chapters have intrested me so much, i ask that you continue this awesome story.