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May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz I love this story I can't wait to read the next chapter
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with your story and I hope to see that u have updated totally love this
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! Damn it about to get to the good part!!
*gets on knees* Please continue, Please. Please. Please.
*gets on knees* Please continue, Please. Please. Please.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lots of mispelled words otherwise heading towards good
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice concept, I liked it. I was set back by the many misspelled words and the grammar, but if you fix it up or have someone do it for you then you've got a really good couple of chapters.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Say it with me: SPACES. Your story is one big blob with no spaces to indicate new paragraphs or anything. It's annoying and makes it slightly hard to read.
Other than that, I am enjoying this fic, so please keep it up.
Other than that, I am enjoying this fic, so please keep it up.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the first chapter, but why can't you read the second chapter? the story is not there.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon i wanna to read more whats Sessy goanna do to Inu? porbably something nuaghty yet entertaning cant wait!
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should make and 3rd chapter I love It!