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awesome!! The suspence is is totally thrilling!! Keep it up!!

I really like!!

Great story! It was beautifully written. You have a sensual way with words. The only notes I have for you are these: 1. Botticelli did not sculpt David. He was sculpted by Michaelangelo. Be sure to research your facts. 2. This goes along with #1. If you are going to use foreign words, be sure to spell them correctly. I'm not trying to bust your balls. I respect your work, and I just want it to be the best it can be. I'm looking forward to the next volume of this series:-)

You called Kikyo an evil, undead clay zombie. *bows down numerous times* I don't have to read the rest to love you as an author. But I read the lemon, and I have to say, I have never read anything with that much feeling and lust at the same time. It was beautiful. But, I'm a sick, perverted person, so, alls I have to say apart from what I just said is this. *shuffles in chair excitedly* I want MORE! Inu/Kag pairings rule all. Especially ones that are so hot they make you a h a hole in your chair. :D What was I gonna say... Oh yeah! That last part where Inu-Yasha thought, 'Sleep mate... you'll need all the rest you can get while you can...' I think I almost went mad thinking that it ended there. PLEASE be a quick updater. (is that a word?... O_O) Update soon!

More, more, more, and did I mention to write more.

Very, Very nice. Good luck if you write more in the future.

I.m glad you decide to grace us with awesome story. Thank you!

Can it get any better then this I don't think so. EXCELLENT!

I truly do hope you decide to continue to writing more this one shots.

it was a pleasure to read this.