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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great please update
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Learn how to punctuate correctly and ditch the self-serving author/character banter at the beginning of the chapters! I'd like to be able to read this story without a freaking decoder ring!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello~!
LOLOL~~!!! I would like to say that I absoluetly love the way you joke around with the characters before each chapter, and am glad to see an author play around with that! Your a very good writer, despite some, and i repeat ONLY some, minor errors, such as grammer/spelling. But that fact hardly takes away from the story. I also like the way you portray Rin and Sesshomaru, they dont seem OOC at all. I truly do hope you update soon, for you will certainly have a fan here! ^_^
Arigato,
Suketchi^_^
LOLOL~~!!! I would like to say that I absoluetly love the way you joke around with the characters before each chapter, and am glad to see an author play around with that! Your a very good writer, despite some, and i repeat ONLY some, minor errors, such as grammer/spelling. But that fact hardly takes away from the story. I also like the way you portray Rin and Sesshomaru, they dont seem OOC at all. I truly do hope you update soon, for you will certainly have a fan here! ^_^
Arigato,
Suketchi^_^
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to ad a new chapter i really like your story so please update soon
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLease please update soon i love this story. i actually have it on my recomended reading list so keep up the good writing
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. I like. A lot
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! yay! new capter!!!!!! tell me when you write more^^
i like ur story so much....
till the nxt chapter ^^
Keep up the great job
i like ur story so much....
till the nxt chapter ^^
Keep up the great job
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tree got to see a free show
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The best line I hear so far this year.."That Alpha Bitch to you"....I LOVE THAT LINE.....GOOD JOB!!!!!!!! Cool Rin standing up for herself....more...more....update soon.....
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was freakin awesome! u should definetly continue on. poor jaken however. o well. but great job on this story