rate_review Reviews

This was done so well. Usually I can see that temporal mechanics thing coming from a mile away, but you had me right up until he finished her at the end. I've always had a soft spot for Kouga, so the ending/beginning/ending/beginning helped to relieve the crushing pain. Good one.

this story is awesome. I really enjoyed reading it, I love your style! I'd just like to thank you for writing a koga/kagome. I LOVE those, people should write more T_T

AWE THAT WAS HEART TOUCHING, PERSOANLLY i ALWAYS FELT KOUGA STARTED OUT JUST WANTING HER FOR THE SHARDS AND THEN GREW TO REALLY LIKE HER.


gREAT SOTRY AS ALWAYS

oJust thought I'd leave a quick note. I like this story, not a lot of people have thought of it like that. It's good!

You wrote a Kouga fic! I was so excited to read it knowing your writing style, and I thought it was beautiful!!!!! The way you portrayed Kouga was awesome, and I like to see him so in character, and Kagome in well. Althought it's refreshing to see a fic like this where the author doesn't make Kouga so dense, and you made him have deep feelings. He is one my favorite characters and I often get disappointed at his portrayal so I thank you for that. YOU'RE MY FAVE!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
MARRY ME!!!

*ahem* pardon the outburst...I'll just go look at your other stuff...

*hugs*
~Quirkyslayer

For some reason AFFN won't let me log in, but when I can, this is going in my Recommended Reading. I don't normally go for Koga/Kagome, but this was beautifully done, and I love the ending - your explanation (since I admit that while I had suspicions of the reason, I wasn't sure) made perfect sense.

Beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I love kouga. Honest in his feelings for Kagome, and doing whatever it took to survive. Loyal to the end. Lovely. Keep writing.

It's just so damn amazing how you put so much thought into your stories...all of them are incredible!! Keep writing in the future!! You have a huge fan in me!! Love, Rocco

wow! (shakes head) i don't know what 2 say! that was very touching. a truly origional take on kouga & kag i like the way u explored the depth of kouga's feelings. if this is a one shot it's amazing & well told if theres more i'm totally intrigued as 2 what story u'll tell! thanks 4 sharing this fab fic! smooches kittin

That was beautiful and very well written.
I should have listened when you said character death.
Tears are falling.
Very emotional and moving.

Shady