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Sure, start to bring the lemon into the story and you kill people. I love angst, don't get me wrong, but that was kind of mean... oh well, you're the mastermind so I'll have to respect your decisions. I hope Sango and Miroku will be alright, and if they are, I have a feeling that Sango will be joining Kagome and Rin at the mansion. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

Have I reviewed this yet? Im not sure. If I haven't smack me. This is one hell of a fic. I am in love with it. Between this and Scars I cant contain my joy. This isnt as tightly written as Scars, but more charming. I am depserate for more. And you are an update champion. I would love to discuss writing techniques with you sometime. And please don't take my comments on Scars to be a knock on your work. This is fantastic. Please, if I have any suggestion, it's slow down the updates. I miss each chapter going up, and then have to spend like 15 minutes catching up. But if that is a complaint, you are doing something right. Please keep what ever it is you are doing up.

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This story just keeps getting better and better.. I can't wait to read more, please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

:O sango!! miroku!! ...i hope they were at her place doing something naughty instead of being at work... ;) also, i like the Rin/Sess thing, you could do a one shot of how they got together... :D

YAY you updated!! It's so cute with Inu Yasha's and Kagome's budding relationship. I can't wait to read more... another fast update would be more than welcome^^ Keep up the good work^__^!!!

Hoolyt Chit that is a really good story i hope that you update reallly sooon.

lol... "Take you out here and bump you off"... such a mobish thing to say... ;)

anyhow, i'm excited for rin and sess! i want to see how they act! i hope she isn't too soft on him!

ohh!! i like ch. 13, 15, and 17 the best! inu was being so cute! and what about rin? i wanna see her!

such a great story! great characters and development, nice plot. keep it up, i'll be waiting for more!

Aww, That was so sweet at the end *sniff sniff* I have really taken a liking to your story and was happy to see that as I was reading you updated. I hope to read more soon... Keep up the good work^__^!!!