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*is crying unashamedly as people in temineminar room stare at her* Could...could you maybe....*sniff* write another chapter? *sniff, snort* Just one....to....depict their child coming...into...the world? P-poor...poor S-Shippo....Na-naraku, you bastard you got what you deserved!!! *tears start anew, and everyone in the room scoots away from her*

Great fic, I love the direction you went with this.

This fic is one of the best written unusual couple fic's that i have ever read. It is very obvious that you put t oft of time and hard work into developing your plot line and keeping the charactors "in" charactor. I look forward to any other fic's that you choose to write!

That was so touching I want to cry but I can't, because everybody's watching me already... *bursts into tears, ringring the fact she's getting strange looks from everyone else.*

Wow. Interesting situation... and somehow, it feels like it could happen that way. Descriptive and well written. Good story. ^-^