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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One simple little word that should get something soon 'MORE', More of this story, it's really good.
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going. If you write more, people will read and review more. Seems pretty good so far - we do actually want to see more of the story.
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice... and really hot. where's the next chap?
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what happens next? please continue
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!! YES!! YES!! You must continue this story, You MUSt!!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*lol*
that's freaky and fun.
how a little blood can FUBAR things.
that's freaky and fun.
how a little blood can FUBAR things.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOO! Spicy! Very good! Keep on with the Keeping on! Looking forward to more!
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hay, great story can't wait 'till the next chappy. please write more soon!!^_^*
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like! I like! Please continue--I'd like to see how it turns out!
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you stopped there!!! OI! what a tease! LOL.. keep going, k?