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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person punkdragon01
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that last chapie is called lemon not lime
person Jennifer
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so addicted to this story!! I love the sexual conflict between both Kagome and Inuyasha ~ are you going to get Sango and Miroku together?
person AxLoverCassie
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better!! I can't wait till the next chappy!!
person nabikineum
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! More story! Thanks muchly. I about laughed my butt off when Shippou said "Miroku...you were such a good friend, I'm sure gonna miss you." It's better than atkin's. Heh, I'm laughing now. Sure the angst, and the pre-sex show and all that, but that line was the biggest laugh I've had today. Thank you ever so.
person Kellie
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter ^___^
person inugirl
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uumm uumm uumm, very nice, I throughly enjoyed reading this it was very romantic and sexy at the same time. MORE MORE! I'm not a professional reviewer or not, I just know what stories I like to come back and read when they get updated, thanks so mush! I just learned how to review hahaha
person fruitcake
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo. another chapter.
person Zelix
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands* WHOOOO!!!! Another masterful piece of a chapter! WHOO!!! That chapter ROCKED!!! Man, i'm running out of praises and enrouraging words to use because i've used pretty much all of the up for you already... i mean that, i need to figure out to say something that surpasses my previous praisings... help me out here! But, for this chapter, all i can say is: I've just discovered religion and this fic is the god of that religion, how's that? Over the top? Whether it is or not, the basic message is this: You rock, write more, soon.

In a case you didn't notice it in my previous review, i've posted a new chapter for "Time Soul Exodus".

See ya, hopefully soon.
person DrkLazarus
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, again, a wonderful chapter. The lemon was artfully written, which is often one of the hardest parts of a fic for most authors. Not much else to say other than keep it up, and I look forward to more!
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH YAY!!!! Another EXCELLENT 2 chapters. I was so happy when I found out that you had updated. I LOVE this story so much. mmm...lime. ::takes fan and tries to cool down:: You got my blood pumping. I need to take a second to recover! hehehe. Poor Inuyasha. He's wonderful in all 3 forms. Like Kagome thinks, he's beautiful no matter what form he takes. OH I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. and thanks for the ramen, i just ate some ::big grin:: Maybe next time, we can get a LEMON!!! Great chappie! Update soon!

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