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WOW. That's all I can say about the lime. The plot to the story is very interesting, I enjoy your writing style. I can't wait to find out what happens with Naraku. Update soon please.

alright only cause you asked so nicely. here is your review! you have a really great story going on. kikyou is truely just awlful isn't she? so were is naraku getting this body for kikyou? does kagura got anything to do with this body? so what did myouga mean by he would find his answers tonight? is inuyasha just such a baka he can't see the tree for the forest? your lime was very well written. thank you for the quick updates and can't wait till you can undate again.

Oh boy... need i say it? I'm at the edge of my seat here! that talk with Kagome and her mother was so... funny.... hehehe... good one. I also like how you described what Inuyasha thinks during his human nights with such high insight and detail, i could literally FEEL what he would feel when you described it, excellent job! Also, the 'new' Kaede's village seems to have become rather, interesting, to say the least, ehehehe..

What more can i say? You blew me away once again! Wow, simply... Wow, get the second part out soon, because i'm DYING to know what happens, i really am, you're most definately my new number 1 writer, i say that with PRIDE.

Oh yes, if you're interested, i've updated "Time Soul Exodus" yet again, chapter 13 is out and i made it extra long compared to other chapters.

See ya!

wooo! an update. heh. kinda funnny. took you long enough. anyways. thanks for updating!

yay! an update! ::hugs::

you have to update soon! your writing has improved sooo much, but you need to make them longer for the readers sake! its sooo good that we dont want to put it down!

Argentina???? It's a shame but I don't know castellano or Spanish. Just portuguese and a bit of english. But I can say that I'm very proud to see "una hermana latina" making a good story. And I live in a state called Paraná, so our borderline is near. So, if you forget to update this fic I'll search you all around Argentina, even in Patagônia!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
I loved Kagome talking with her mama. It was very funny. But I'm biting my nails to see what will happen in the night to come.
Big hugs from Brasil (I'll write Brasil with 's' because you must know this is the right form)!

Lere

This chap was deliciously long considering the wait I had to endure for it. Much appreciated. I adore you as well, and I will have to go check my e-mail now, cuz I hardly ever have time to read, review, write, and go to school all together! ::pants:: I know I have told you so many times before, but I will go ahead and tell you again, WONDERFUL STORY!!! ::bows in praises to YM:: I have progressed a little on my story, but my computer crashed a few days ago, so I had to start all over, it was devastating. Luckily, I found my original copy in my handy dandy notebook! So it wasn't all bad!! I am flattered that you wish to mention me in all your AN's cuz I love ya! Your AN also cleared up a few questions I had, so it is all good now. (Naraku is such an evil bastard) I may not like the dead bitch, but she can come in handy at times, and in the end I think that everyone wants her to be at peace, just not at the expense of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship. YM, you are an amazing writer and you should never doubt yourself, and I have to make a mental note to hurry and check out BtS. As always, love you bunches, love your story, and thanx for everything!!

*Once more, with feeling* Lots of love, ramen, and pocky,
Psycho Koneko

Ok my favorite review whore....here's some fodder for the metaphorical nightstand, but don't worry, I'll still respect you in the morning.. lol. Love the chapter! Especially the memories Kagome had while talking to her mom about licking Inu's ears and what part of his anatomy they are closely linked too- priceless! And that he doesn't bite...much! Ha ha ha! Great description of her physique the morning after. Right on the money! I thought you captured Kagome's emotions well- I would be giddy and floating on cloud nine, too, having had the experience she did with the one she has loved for so long. Of course, now there's something else he's keeping for her...poor puppy, won't he ever learn? We all know Mr. Puppy boy get more emotional on the night of the new moon....please tell me that they will be locked, alone, in that hut together? That's a great set up if I ever read one. Nicely subtle, what with Inu asking and the plans made before Kags showed up, so now for the alone time....

Damn girl so long without an update I'm getting a bad case of blue balls. Or at least as much as a girl can LOL. You're right about Naraku not being interested in sex. I actually think his charater is very frigid, Naraku is the oposite of Onigumo. Onigumo was hot headed in all things such as battle and lust. Naraku is very cold and controled he never feels heat in anything not in battle or lust, ever (think when he fought Sango with the Tetsiguia he never lost his cool just his lunch when Kagome destroyed his body). The fact that he tries so desperatly to subdue Onigumo is a testament to how uncomfortable his feelings are. Also the fact that he goes to a lot of effort to kill Kikiou but really doesn't like to be close to her to much is because he's hiding that he's afraid of her and what his 'heart' really wants, he's digusted by lust. I love this story to pieces your writing is amazing I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank You:)