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by greeneyes4642000

person Nekohime
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snatches muffin Giggles and runs away*

Heheh.. this is a wonderful start! I'm really loving this story already. Good stuff.. But my poor poor Inu baby. SO sad what has already happened to him and I feel sorry for anything else his cunning brother might have in store for his unknowing self.
One thing I 'd like is LONGER chapters! Though this one is a nice length, when I really like a story I love it even more when the chapters are so long I'm checking the side bar just to see how much longer I have to go (This is a good thing people!)

Good stuff here..

Neko's Rate: 5 stars

(How hard is it to rate?)
person Ru-Shin
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ W00t! This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon plz! Now...about that muffin...? ^^
person Golden
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanna muffin! Lmao, acutally, I rather have a new chapter then a muffin ^.^;; I think I remember reading this before, but I'm not sure. Have you posted the begginings to it on this site or FF.net before? Or was it some other site? Cos I could swear I remember this fic vagely... Oh well! If it really is what you posted last time, I can't wait to see what you do to make this continue to unfold!!!! YAY YUMMY INUxSESSNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^__________________________________^

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
person whitelightening
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey keep up the good work I really like it so far.
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks interesting. Please continue!!!
person Tenshi
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I wonder what will happen next? I just hope there's a lemon nearby! ^_^ I hope you update soon!!!
person CrazyDramaQween
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Story. I think I read it by you from somewhere else. Continue please?? :D

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