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Damn it, damn it, damn it. Why did you have to stop it there. I loved it, absolutely loved iot. Poor Rin, I feel so bad for her, what's going to happen next? I need to know. I want more. Please, please, please update. I'll do anything..........................................

I'm sooo glad you updated finally, but that chap... was just kinda sad... I don't know what to think. Will her get the blue ribon she's wearing today? I hope they make up and stuff soon. Sesshomaru is a lot warmer when he's with Rin (talkin bout the anime/manga too) I hope you'll update again soon. This chapter was good, mayber a few spelling errors or whatever but I'm just glad you udpated.

Well...
Laterz
Inus_Kagome_Forever

No....THAT GODDAMN MOTHER FUCKING ASSHOLE! SESS YOU GET YOUR PLAYBOYIN ASS BACK THERE AND APOLOGIZE TO RIN! *yells at the screen* Harley pokes her head in, Moon stop yelling at the screen, it isn't real. That what they want you to believe! Moon replies. Yeah anyway, I almost wet myself when I realized you had updated. Ahhh, I've been waiting so long, and then this. Well at least both of them know that each other knows. *Shakes head* Sess, *starts talking to the screen again* You better get on your knees and beg forgivness for all the shit you said to Rin, and further more if anyone around here is a slut its you! You..*starts cursing again* I need a drink *goes off to find a diet Dr, Pepper*

aWW He humilated her. =(

He better suffer as well before this is all through.
Love your writing please continue

I know I already reviewed, but I went back and read what Sess said to her, and I...*starts shaking, then yells even louder than before* SESS EVEN I FUCKING HATE YOU! I LIKED YOU THEN THIS, YOU SUCK! YOU DON'T FUCKING DESERVE RIN! YOU SHOULD ROT IN THE 7 HELLS! *clenchs fists* I WANT TO STRANGAL YOUR PERFECT NECK YOU BASTARD! *lunges at the screen* DIE!

Post chapter 6, of course!!! Why would you want to leave us readers wondering what happens?

ok i love this strory and have been reading it sence you posted the first chapter i dont care if you update this story and its only half a page and in big print
****CRY/SCREAM***JUST GIVE ME SOMETHING I NEED TO KNOW MORE. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS***CRY/SCREAM****

***calm/sweat*** please if you dont want to update jest yet please send me what you do have of the capter so i dont kill myself or worse .........get bord..(shudders)

Wow, i love the whole story and can't wait to read the chapter 6....and yes wait until u have written the whole chapter and then post it . I especially love the last chapter which was chapter 5... love the fact that it started as a lemon and a nice lemon at that.....keep up the good work

Your story is great so far! Please post, even if the chap is not complete, that's okay- I'm addicted
your fan,
Allie

Well, i would be happy to have a piece to read but i think i can wait to have the whole chapter ready.
There are a lot of writers that take months to update. Im not telling that i like that but if you need time, i cant wait because i know that the waiting is wothr it.