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for Just Grind

by AJs

person Anon
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww fuck that lemon was hot, made me feel all tingly and stuff, I loved it and the whole chapter was hot, more, more, more I am addicted
person Kit
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why are authors obsessed with cliff hangers? its horrible, we want to knowwww... PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!!
person Midnight Lady
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....okay. so rin is how old? 17? for one, that's too young to work at that sort of club-- and two, she's too young to have a liquor license.

don't know why, those little facts bothered me. *shrugs* it's a good read.
person morwen re
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good! please hurry up with the next chapter! please! ^-^
person MariB
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo good! update
person Paige C.
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This definately wasn't the greatest sex scene in the world of fanfiction. Sesshomaru was too much of a bastard in my opinion. I'm not a fan of total guy dominance, so it wasn't that appealing to me. I can't wait for the next chapter, though!

Update soon! Bye-Bye!
person Jennifer
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH!! That review was sooo mean...let us know what happens!?!?!
person DarkLady
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do you really need to ask? do i really need to write this review? OF COURSE WE WANT MORE SO WRITE MORE DAMNIT!
person animelo
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Can't wait to find out what Sess means by finishing what she started. Please continue. =)
person Kheylia
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!! Cliffies suck!! Please hurry and post the next chapter! Make it juicy! x.x;; You're doin' really good, don't quit!

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