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by AJs

person Moon Dog
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, Sess is so dense, why can't he see it. He must be soo pissed when he wakes up later. I feel bad for Inu though, that must have been a horrible night. Update when you can.
~Moon Dog
person Silent screams
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. I can't wait until you update!! UPDATE N HURRY PLZ!!!!!!
person SesshoumarusMistress
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME chapter.... im soooo happy that you finally updated! YAY! but u left it off with another cruel cliffy... so you kno what that means right? it means that since im reviewing, and you already have ur next chapter done, that you have to update with it ASAP!
person binab86
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah you updated i love this chapter it was awesome i cant wait for the next. im not joking either i am at the edge of my seat. loved it cant wiat for the next
person CHIBIchibi
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my, my how could you just stop like that... I need more, I loved this chapter and Sesshomaru sounded so sexy... kinky I loved it... please, please update as soom as soon as you can *pouts while clasping hands together* pleaseeeeee oh and by the way, the lemon was hotttt..... so hot that my body felt like it was burning tooo
person FoxFireDemoness
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arggggggggg how could you just stop it there? I need more, please, please please update. I'll get down on my hands and knees if I have to. I loved the leon, it had the right amount of sensuality and friction between them. I can't believe this, please, more, need more. Argg how could you *wails and whimpers* more please, I'm dying to know what happens next and the preview sounds juicy
person ivy
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg it was deffinetly worth the wait i cant wait to read what happens next and especially
with that litle preview ur cruel lol please update fast i just cant wait
person reviewer
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's with all the 'smirking' during the lemon? If a guy constantly 'smirked' at me with some self-satisfied expression while we were about to get it on, I'd slap him silly and call it off. Describing Sesshoumaru as 'smirking' all the time just ruined the scene to me. 'Sorry, but that's my opinion. I don't intend this to be a flame at all.
person Cassie
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! ^___^ that chapter was so hot that I needed a cold glass of soda water. Some strong root beer. Damn I can't wait for the next chapter. mmmm that was a good hot and steamy chapter. keep up the good work.

^____^
Cassie
person animegirl007
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, "DAMN THAT WAS A GGGGGGOOOOOODDDDDDDD LEMON!!!!!!!!!! I NEEDED A COLD SHOWER AFTER READING IT!!!! TWO THUMBS UP, EXCELLENT AS ALWAYS!!!!!!! ......Now, Secondly, I just knew the bitch Kagura was a stalker!!!!!! probably was around his house all night, Ooohhh!!! I can't stand her anywhere around Sesshomaru in the anime......but, I do so love her so a villian....next, What the hell wrong with Sesshomaru??? He going to be upset when he finally finds out who Sato is ???? Hey, it's not Rin fault that everybody else in the world knew who she was and he didn't.... I love Sesshomaru, but I can tell you are going to make me mad at him!!!!!!! Update soon please..........I can't wait for my drama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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