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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this one, it seems to be well thought-out enough and readable. kudo's to you! ^_^
*can't wait to read the results of the change*
*can't wait to read the results of the change*
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eep! you are such a good writer i love your fictions! I can't wait for the next chapter! wee.
~Faye
~Faye
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love it! and yes another chapter please.... *whimpers with puppy eyes*
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nauhgty naughty little hentai you!( smirks ) Must admit, you do write good - ahem - shall we say action ? ( read a few of your offerings by the way) I'll be back to see what you pull out of the closet next.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I love the pairing but hate the fact that you are 'changing kagome into a very rare youkai'. Why can't you leave her a beautiful human miko? Changing what she is makes her the ultimate mary-sue, and too many authors do that. Seriously, there is nothing wrong with keeping her human. When you change WHAT she is, you lose a lot of readers since we can't identify with her anymore.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Not bad, but I think I agree with the previous reviewer - Kagome is a prize just the way she is, without making her a demon.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the first chapter. Not so hot on the update though - I guess I'm just the kind of reader who hates to see people change Kagome. It's so much sexier to see the big bad youkais love a human, IMO. Changing her makes her an Original Character. Anyway, just my .02
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoops, just reread chapter 2, and your a/n at the bottom, and the other reviews on this fic - that's what I get for leaving a review today based on what I read yesterday... *sigh*.
I'm very glad you are keeping her miko though. It makes a major difference, at least to me, and apparantly a couple of others :).
I'm very glad you are keeping her miko though. It makes a major difference, at least to me, and apparantly a couple of others :).
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! MORE!!!! I love your writing style.....Plus your hentai was great!! ::blushes::
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! That was great! Please continue!! I LOVE IT!!! <0^-^0>