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for Survival of the Pack

by Yukiarashi

person Fireminx
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm so happy you got another chapter out! I loved the civil banter between Kagome and Sesshoumaru....that was priceless! I look forward to reading more! Good job!
person ennui deMorte
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love all the entrances, especially Kagome's. The best line of the chapter, however, is the last one: each short a hanyou. Simple, short, but oh so illustrative. And Kagome's point about human clothing is great! But showing up Sesshoumaru in front of his pack probably isn't the best survival technique. I do like Kagome explaining how getting to know humans and spending time with them is as much defensive as it is trying to peacefully coexsist with humans. Know thy enemy. Looking forward to seeing more!
person highlands
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good, I hope you update soon. you've made lots of possibilities, but specially with I/K, I would like to see more os Sessh and Rin, but of course, being Sessh it will take some time. keep on going!!
person Sassy Chan
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted to say that you're fanfic is really wonderfully written and exceptional creative, it's good to see a different AU idea then the repeative high school, AUs and to have yours done so nicely and informative.

However, at the end there was one error as regards to what Inuyasha's name means, I want to say this in the nicest way I can, because it really drives me crazy when people say this. Inuyasha is indeed "Dog Demon" Yasha is a chinese forest demon spirit, which can be both male and female, not just female. In other words, saying Yasha, is kind of like a slang word for Demon.

You're fanfic is indeed very great and orignal. I just hate it when people get misinformed about something and put it in a fanfic saying it's true. Like how you pointed out, that you hate it when people misprenoncce Shesshoumaru's name. (The Dubbed anime dose alot things that piss me off too ><)

But other then that you're fanfic is really great, keep up the good work. I can't wait until the next chapter! ^^
person kitty
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it lol write more PLEASE!
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really enjoying your story. I like how everyone is either demon or hanyou. quite the storyline you having going I'm quite entralled by it. Please keep up the good work and update when you can.
person fluffy
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi! i really really like how this story is turning out! great job!
person essie
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great please update
person Fireminx
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving every chapter!!!
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im so happy your still writing this fic i really like it. I was reading it on a different page. keep up the good work :)

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