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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, chapter 9 is messed up! Please fix it! I love this story!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome story! i truly hope that you continue writing it! it's so interesting and the plot just sucks you in! i can't wait to see what the rest of the dimensions are like! i bow down to such a great fanfic writer! *bows* and i truly wait eagerly until the next chapter!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh u are so evil to leave it there like that and then tell us it might not be updated really soon oh u are so EVIL AND EVIL CLIFFIES rrrrrrrrrrrrr hurry hurry and tell me what happends to kagome and poor inuyasha! UPDATE
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I hope you update again soon. It's unique and interesting.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot for this story! It's such a good idea. But...um...I'm sorry, I'm just a bit of a grammar freak, and a few things have kind of been bothering me. Did you end up finding a beta? Because if not, I would be willing to help out. The writing has real potential, and if it were cleaned up a bit, the story would be a little bit easier to read.
Anyway, if you're interested, my e-mail is aryanteofrohan@hotmail.com and my AIM screenname is broadwaymarquee. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anyway, if you're interested, my e-mail is aryanteofrohan@hotmail.com and my AIM screenname is broadwaymarquee. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to repeat it....I love your writing is well done and very original. So please, pretty please update as soon as posible!!!!! I really love and need to read more chapters.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
guess who reviews! I read it and the only thing I can say delicious! I will resd the rest as soon as I can. Hope you are not too angry with me or my english. But of course I like it and your Humor go on go on.
Simply genios. You know I`m not very good in criticising in avery constructive way so forgive me and what would be worth criticising?
Simply genios. You know I`m not very good in criticising in avery constructive way so forgive me and what would be worth criticising?
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great minds think alike! I'm also working on a story in which Kagome breaks her neck right off the bat; otheriwse totally unlike yours.
The character development for Inuyasha is really good. However, the spelling, not so good. If you still need a beta, drop me an email. My grammar and punctuation are decent and I'm an ace speller.
The character development for Inuyasha is really good. However, the spelling, not so good. If you still need a beta, drop me an email. My grammar and punctuation are decent and I'm an ace speller.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I CARE! this is a really great and funny fic! update soon!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH Thank you, thank you, thank you...sooo much for updating.....dont stop please continue on with the story I told you before and I'll repeat it I love your story...I just cant wait that long to read another chapter so please udate as soon as posible