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Why is this so dark I wanted to see shiori with Inu and all Kagome is driving me crazy I wanted to put this story down so many times during my reading yet I just couldn't I feel bad for the loss of the child, the betrayal all around from everyone. I can't breath cause I just want everyone happy are you sure this isn't just a sick dream or something that maybe kagome is just dreaming or something. Hooooooo hummm I just don't know if I wanna ask you to write the end of this story well I guess I got to say ok but be kind I want Happiness but there has been so much loss I can't hurry and finish and make me happy. I guess keep up with the good work cause you have me on the edge.........

****Walks in, dabs her eyes******

Arigato...........thankx so much, I'm really glad you liked it. I'm thinking hard on my next move. Oh yeah....don't worry, Naraku will pay dearly for violating little Rin the way he did. Keep your eyes open for the next chpter!

Really good dark chapter. 0_0 Poor Rin!! Oh what is Sesshoumaru going to do to Naraku for this? Hope to see more soon!! Nicely done!!

I really don't see a reason for you to be nervous. It was a great chapter. I love how you made IY see Kagome as disturbed as she was. I know that her mom knows that she cheated, but I can't wait to see how she takes the news that IY cheated, and quite a few times. I hope she explains to him and imagining one's lover in the arms of another is bad, but seeing their lover is a bit worse. Anyways, I won't be longwinded tonight, but I just wanted to tell you that I loved this chapter and am glad to see that he has actually seen Kagome.

I also loved the part with Shiori and Sesshomaru. The only think I would like to see is Naraku purified straight to hell. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Eagerly awaiting,

KogasAngel

Thanks again for all of your reviews....I'll be faster with the next chapter:0

hell yell it took U long enough, now update faster...hehehe just kidding, but I do hope U UPDATE faster!!

First of all....(Yes, this will be quite a bit, so get comfy) I was thrilled to see a new chapter. I am glad that Shiori was not blind to what Inu Yasha was going through. She doesn't deserve to be played with, and for some reason, that is what she keeps getting, but in a way, she does deserve something for messing with a male who was mated, just like Kouga deserved something for messing with Kagome. Either way, all parties involved got spanked, it seems.

I was thrilled to see Kouga re-enter the picture and see Kagome for what she really was, someone who was able to break and I am glad to see that he was also very selfish. Kagome probably did the best thing for all parties involved. Now, at least an innocent child would not be brought into some messy situation, and I commend you for the way you handled it.

Sesshomaru finally came back into the picture and I am glad to see that he stepped in for Shiori's protection. It was nice to see him care about her. Though, if you could somehow find it in your heart to have him slaughter Naraku, I would be happy. Something very messy. Yes, that would do very nicely.

Inu Yasha deserved that smack, but he also needed it. He had to learn that people can only take so much, and I guess he found out how much Shiori could take. Cheers for Kouga when he went to go and get Inu Yasha. Finally, it looks as though it might be possible for them to get back together. Hopefully.

Poor Kagome. I do feel badly for her. I know she is not faultless, but I do think that she got the worst of the situation. I am glad that you put Ginta there for her. She really needed a friend, and he was just that. Hopefully, in the next chapter, Inu Yasha will go to her.

Well, I will admit that I have never been one for Inu/Kagome pairings(check out my penname, lol) But, I will say that I have fully enjoyed yours. It has made me feel a range of emotions and I am glad that I have had the opportunity to read this. Great job.

Well, I told yout that this would be long, so you were warned. I am looking forward to the next chapter and can't hardly wait.

KogasAngel

I love your story its the best i've read yet .Can't wait for the next chapter.

i really really really hope that kag does not get back with kag. he slept with shoiri alot while kagome only slept once with kouga. please let her move on and kouga forgive her and they pair to gether. cause if i was in her position i counld never forgive him. i mean if he did it once okay understandable. but he just kisses her and have sex with her all the time. PLEASE DO NOT LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!!! let it be kag and kouga

Hey guys! Wow, I'm almost overwhelmed here...lol

Kouga's Angel, you rock! Thank you so, so much.

Red Hat...Hey now, Inu's not ALL bad..lol Thanks for the comment though, you're funny.

To the rest (sorry, don't want to mess up your names;) ).... You know, you are right, Inu is wrong for playing with Shiori.....he doesn't mean to, he's hurting. Will Sesshomaru step in?

Where is Naraku?
Will Koga ever forgive Kagome?

All these and more shall be answered.....I hope....lol:)