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person sunshine22
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Lemon, between whom? If Kagome sleeps with Koga again I swear I'm gonna just... However, if it's Yash and Shiori, I will rejoice in happiness. I am soooo glad Sango and Miroku went off on Kagome, she is such a brat, everything is Yash's fault no matter what happens. Is it too much to ask for Kagome to get eaten by a rogue youkai, or perhaps die as as old bat surrounded by a bunch of cats, while Yash and Shiori have 4 children every century?
person Kira
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapter! I really want too read it! please write it! i love it soooooooooooooooo much!

love
-Kira
person kouga kun
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some competion for Kagome go get your man Shori. I still would like it to be I/K.
person Albino Elf
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon.
person Goddess
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what is going to happen next?
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Shori going to fall for the gruffy hanyou, I'm glad he told off Sango.
person Kagome179
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes i remember Shioir and it will be very instresting in the next chapter to find out how she fell in love with Naraku and what's Kagome planing to do now.
person Inu-Shinta
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shiori is the female bat-hanyou who Inuyasha saved and she also helped Inuyasha to strengthen his sword. Are you gonna put Inuyasha and Shiori together? If you do please keep Inuyasha and Kagome friends.
person sunshine22
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this, a possible Inuyasha and Shiori to give Kagome a little more competition, very good spin on things. I am sooooo sick of fics with Yash continuously crying over Kagome as she gets her kicks, having him gaining an interest in someone else makes it waaaay more entertaining. I am glad Yash cursed out Sango too, she is definitely a "self righteous bitch". I understand supporting your BFF, but I mean when she's wrong she's wrong, Yash is the victim in this scenario, and has been way past supportive and tolerant. I can't wait to read what you have in store for Yash and Kagome's future. Good job and update soon.
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my gosh.....! Wow, I so did not expect all these rreviews!!! Thank you all soooo much. I'm workingon the next chappie and I hope you all dig it as much as the others. Thank you.....they really like me!....lol

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