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Wow, that was a tough chapter to read alot of emotions being felt in this chapter, then is one thing you might want to think about is Kagome comes from a shinto shrine and it seems to me that a are little religious and I was thinking I don't think Kagome would give up the baby or have an abortion but leaving it like this is also very good it is nice to see sesshomaru there for his brother. I eagerly await the next installment.

Wonderful plot twist and could it get more heart wrenching then losing a baby and also losing the love of your life over one mistake.

All I can say is this is a truly awesome story.

I love all the twist and turns your story is going through.

Man I missed alot but it is getting really good.

I was actually about to cry for Kagome it must be really awful for her right now but she does have a lot of support and Inuyasha doesn't.

More Please.

0,0" Wow!!
Damn I was at the edge of my seat on the end of chapter 4..
Ohh love the angst. please continue on.

Hey, I am so happy that you took the risk and finally let the whole world see what a selfish tease Kagome can be without Inu Yasha taking all of the blame. I do have a question though, will this remain an I/K? Because even if it does, you should consider introducing another female (old or OC) that vies for Yashy's attention, and not in a "slutty" way like the redhead, but in a more "supportive/friendly" way. It seems like while Kagome always has the support of her friends/family, no matter what she does, Yash is always alone and has to take the step (whether his fault or not) to bring them back together. Like in chapter 3 she sort of gave up on him, and never made an attempt (although I am aware he was pissed) to go the extra mile to explain to him/grovel/beg or anything. I think that Kagome believes in the back of her mind that she is the only person that can love Yash "unconditionally" (even Kikyo required a trade-off to completely love him) and therefore takes his patience/love for her for granted. I think that if Kagome believed Yash may find happiness and unconditional love with someone else, she may have to go the extra mile this time to prove her own self to him instead of the other way around. Sorry this was so long, but I got on a roll. Keep writing, I like the possibilities of this story.

im crying you made me cry i love you r story so much though.....an om going to continue reading it!!!!! LOVEIN UR STORY!!!!!!