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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your second chapter was written pretty solid, I love how you talked about the trust issue cause that is the most important issue when a person cheats, I once read a stroy were Kagome cheated on Inuyasha, Inuyasha found out left and in that same day Kagome meet her lover to break it off and had sex with him the same day as when Inuyasha found out about her cheating so I must give you praise.
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You hit it on the nail will Inuyasha ever be able to trust her again?
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is great. Sorry, but I´m absolutely speechless.Will you write more?
Greetz Kisara
Greetz Kisara
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Intersting take, I hope Inuyasha can forgive her somehow.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Adultery is a very tough subject to write about, I will have to read your later chapters to see where you take this and then I will rate it but it does look promising.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In one way I was mad at Kagome for doing that to Inuyasha and yet at the same time I was really sad for her also. Great start!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally someone has decided to write about Kagome as being unfaithful. Very Refreshing.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I think story is going to be pretty angsty but I love angsty!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome was being very bad, I wonder what is going to happen.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just don't know how Kagome could cheat on Inuyasha like that I mean come on it is Inuyasha one of the hottest bishies in all of anime if he was mine he wouldn't leave my bedroom.