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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice... I'm usually not a fan of Sesshomaru, but I enjoyed this, and I hope you continue writing.
One thing I noticed in the third chapter was an overlap of dialogue in a single paragraph--meaning that two characters spoke. That makes is a bit confusing, but I suspect that it was just a mistake...
Anyway, you seem like an excellent writer. I enjoyed the emotion you put in your writing. If you still need a lemon writer, I might try.
One thing I noticed in the third chapter was an overlap of dialogue in a single paragraph--meaning that two characters spoke. That makes is a bit confusing, but I suspect that it was just a mistake...
Anyway, you seem like an excellent writer. I enjoyed the emotion you put in your writing. If you still need a lemon writer, I might try.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY YOUR'RE NOT DEAD! PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!I'LL GIVE YOU COOKIES!