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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really like this one! I hope you decide to write more with youkai Inu/Kag! This was damn good, keep it up!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good. Maybe do a sequel where Inuyasha fucks Kagome anally. Maybe have a 3-some with Inuyasha, Kagome, and Kagura, or Kagome's mother.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it although you did do 1 of my pet peeves, there's no such word as thrusted, the past tense of thrust is still thrust. Also somewhere in here is you're [contraction of you are] which should be your [as in belonging to you]. I hope this helps & doesn't offend you.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..... omg that was sooooooooooooooo good im not kidding it was the best one i have read.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You definitely have to do the next chapter. They definitely need some clean up in the hot spring or river after that (especially Kagome). And since they are so kinky, maybe Kagome can introduce them to toys from the modern world in the sexcapade :)!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes write more lemons!!! Oooo yes that would be soooo great a bunch of lemons between inu and kag. You soooooooooooooo have to do that. That was ur first lemon? *Jaw drops.* Your kidding right? THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!! I SO LOVED IT!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!^_^
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well Written lemon....I have to go take a cold shower now!!!! ^_^
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..omg..ur amazing plz plz plz plz * gets on knees* do another chapter this is so awsome * sniff*
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely hot and steamy--just like a PWP should be. Good job!
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! that was amazing!! congratulations!!! it's been a while since a read an all sex rought fic lol.. you should definetly conitnue this... i liked that boob sex stuff .. it was new and original... you should do chapters with differents possitions and stuff ^^ *i'm such a hentai* congrats again!!