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for Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera

by plumcider

person snowfall
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I've missed so many updates. Kagome's collapse was mysterious. Point for you. The idea that Inu's youkai blending with Kagome's purity could kill her is a new one on me. Nice. What angst! Well written. Please update soon.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was just really harsh. poor kag...i mean, yeah, i guess she deserved it but i mean, inu was telling her one minute that he knew it was her and he knew what happened (not another dream, ne?) and tehn suddenly it's her fault. baka yasha. if i was Kagome, man he would never be able to look up from teh hole he was in. URGGG. i loved the 'good fucking greif' line. hehehehe. very good chapter, a couple very well timed raw emotions for people to chew on for a while. very well written. keep it up!!!!
person inuficcrzy
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so damn cool.

i love it! now, will sess give inu grief, or will he be remotely gracious about all of this?
person CrossbowTrueshot
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....nice update....and i think we've all learned a very important lesson...

Inuyasha's mother was a miko.......lol

No really, very good chapter, but please atleast let Inuyasha admit that he loves her within a chapter or two....
the angst is literaly killing me....great job

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot
person Alvida
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The family engagement ring, perhaps? Or whatever fulfills the same function in inu youkai society? Sorry. I'm just a big softy.
person GlowingEyesInTheShadows
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up with the next chapter I wanna see what happens please.
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyy,
This is a great fic. You have some true talent going. I love the uniqueness of this fic and its balance between characters, dialogue, plot, and genre. I hope to see another chapter soon. So until then, keep up the amazing work!!!!
Claire (^-^)
person drake220
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nicely done! good chapter. though miyouga should be getting his ass kicked for that little stunt,
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update
person KimiAnnn1RebAnn1
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is getting Xtremely good continue as soon as you can please I'm begging You. I never bag so take this as a complement.

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