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for It All Adds Up

by michelle5137

person myrrdinowl
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no worries and i really liked how you handled the great farewell scene. if you think your mistake was funny then listen to this. a friend of mine was at work and she and a few of her co-workers were talking. Somehow they got on the topic of Japan and my friend said the holiday she would miss the most when she was living would be thanksgiving. Her one co-worker replied with "don't they celebrate thanksgiving?" i would normallly say america-centric, but i think in her case it was all out ignorance. keep up the great work and update soon! :)
person Ookami K.
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found it.... cool. I love it.... Yes, a bit boring but hey you gotta give detail before the fun begins.... I loved the part about Sesshoumaru finding Kagome in her time...... That's so cool.... I wonder if Shippou, Inu Yasha or Kouga will live till Kagome's time? Gotta love Kouga, he so gullible and naive.... Well that's all for now until next the chapters.... Peace.
person myrrdinowl
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent except for one little thing. July 4 is only the US's independence day. As far as i know, japan has never had one since they have never overthrown a tyrannical foreign government.
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you before how much I love your style of writing? If I haven't, I'll say it now. I love the way you write! Very good first chapter, you bring through her emotions over making such an agonizing decission extremely well. We can't wait for you to update!
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read in the closet and then the beginning of this story. WOW WOW WOW
I really really like it. I do have a suggestion. Since everyone in their lives is in the dark about their upcoming mating; maybe it should be discovered by Kagome's very protective demon brother Sessohumuru. I bet that would send some shockwaves through the group!
person Sentinel_of_Ganymede
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAHHHHH!!!! This Sentinel is soooo sad! Kagome's adventure is over!!!!!! But this Sentinel can't help but look forward to seeing what is coming up next! Please don't keep us waiting!!!

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