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person Atropa (not signed in)
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a nice touch of bringing in Rin into the story. Nice twitch indeed. I love your lemons too... they are soo hot... :)
person update soon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome
person My Sweet Koinu
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. You are an excellent writer, and I hope you keep up the good work. *smirk* I love Kagome bashing. ;)
person miyu-chan
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am reading this again. i can't seem to get enough of this chapter.... it's so kawaii!!!!!!
person yukiko
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally some good news !! and a nice lemon ....

I have only one thing to say .... you .... CUT .... kouga ...... ponytail ?
this ...... they better strangely grow really fast soon !!!!!!!
person Zombie Hamster
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another beautiful chapter! And I may be wrong, (or you could've chosen to do this on purpose) but I was under the impression that there's no difference between a priestess and a miko. Just something I caught that I wondered about. Please don't be offended if I don't know what I'm talking about!

Keep up the good work. ^.^--ZH
person Zombie Hamster
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another beautiful chapter! And I may be wrong, (or you could've chosen to do this on purpose) but I was under the impression that there's no difference between a priestess and a miko. Just something I caught that I wondered about. Please don't be offended if I don't know what I'm talking about!

Keep up the good work. ^.^--ZH
person IYYashi
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this! Keep going because I was about to re-read it and...well it's kind of embarrassing to admit so at least finish this story and never kill Inu Yasha again! C ya!
person XxXinukaiXxX
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the greats most emotional thing i have ever read....and i'm still shocked.
person IYYashi
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I wish I read this story earlier! It's well-written and I love the plot! I'm so excited to find out what happens next. And if Inu Yasha dies I will never forgive you! Kagome is an evil bitch! All I had to say! Update soon! So I'll see you when I see you.

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