rate_review Reviews

TWO WORDS! LOL YOU UPDATE SOON PLEASE? LOL well actually that was four words! ^___^





- AnimeFan

Very nicely done. Interesting twist with Hiten, Shippo, and Souten. The little fantasy of Inuyasha's was quite hot, though I don't think Kagome would act so... wantonly. I actually thought it was Kikyou or some other slut. I have a question, though: You wrote at the end that Kagome didn't want to fall for *another* pretty boy. Who was the first? Good chapter, please update soon.

I LOVE IT oh and thanks for the e-mail

keep writing or i'll die of.........ummm.....unreadingness......*feels silly*
haha...................well plz plz plz plz plz plz keep going im in love with the story
HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..*run's around crazily*

inuyasha:i told you miroku stop giving her sake.....what's your intention?"
miroku:well........*say's really low* i want to get her in bed with me....."
inuyasha:*beats miroku to a pulp* back off of her you perverted monk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway's she's mine......hmm *blush's* sorry darkblossom......hehehehe*walks away*
sutekii:*huggs inuyasha*inuyasha kiss me*still drunk*
inuyasha:UHHHH....sutekii's well........ummm drunk gotta go bye ohhhh and KEEP WRITING!!!! >_<

inuyasha cast and sutekii holding onto inuyasha:KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*cheers encouragingly*bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~

love,your new friend,,,sutekii +_+

I love it! I want to know what happens at the pool hall. Please update soon.

It was good. I hope you update soon. or else I'll cry. You wont like it when I cry. I'll cry you a river. thats what I'll do. you'll most likely drown. and die. what a humiliating way to go. to die by the tears of a fan. tch. Conitnue soon or else.

-Allison

Very nice and teasing chapters are eye catching!

I loved it!! Please update again soon!

Wow... this chapter was so good. I like the twist with Shippou, Souten, and Hiten. Who's gonna get the guy and when I found out Shippou was Inuyasha's cousin I just had to laugh. But anyway I wanna know what's gonna happen next. I also liked the slight lime you put in there. I really, really want to know what's gonna happen next. Please, please, please, update, update, update, update, or else I'll tell my daddy. ::pouts:: please

DUDE THE WAS SO TOTALLY RICHEOUS OH YEAH THANKS FOR MENTIONING ME!

^^I really like this story. This is the first one to go on my list too. =O). I like Inuyasha's attitude in this, very tempting. I happened to turn for a sec to see what was on the tv, and it turned out to be Inuyasha. I just started to laugh, and then I turned back because after that, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the page. =O). Update As Soon As You Can =D...Please and Thankie thankies ^_^