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I love it i L-O-V-E I-T the beginning is amazing and shows great potental keep up the good work

OH...MY...GOD!!! That was so awesome dude! I mean I liked the first one but I absolutely loved this one. I'm dying for the next installment please hurry up and update soon dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice work, I love it. Hope you can update soon. PLEASE!!!!!!!

i like it- write!...i'm not to good at this

I agree, much better than the previous chapter! If I may... try to be a bit more descrptive. I noticed that epecially when Inuyasha was confronting Kikyo, you could have made a better picture with it. Also, I'm not sure it you know the codes for inserting italics, bold print, etc. When you want to itlicize a word, place a

< i >

in front of it (no spaces between characters). When you want to stop the italization, place

< / i >

behind it. For bold or unerlining, simply replace the i with a u or a b. If you already know and just don't want to do that, disregard. I didn't know, and a friend of mine had to show me, so I figured I'd pass along the info.

I can't wait to see the next chapter, upsate soon!

I like it! good start to what i can tell will be a good story!

omg that was fuckin awsome please pelase update soon and when you do please tell me ^_^ i cant wait to find out what happends next, its just soooooo sooooooooo GOD i cant even think of a work damnit xD anyways please tell me when u update your story
thankies
KuroK

I like it. It is definitely better than the last one. I read that one, too. You've got me hooked. Please update soon.

Very cliché story line you have here...very very overused, but this one has caught my eye. Just PLEASE don't let Kagome give in until the last second. You'll lose a few fans if you do. I dislike with a passion when people make Inuyasha and Kagome have sex in the blink of an eye since they have such an "instant attraction." Especially since you have played it out to the extreme how much Kagome hates even the thought of Inuyasha. Hmm maybe she could just lead -him- on a bit and leave him hanging. Realize, unless you are planning on going OOC, that Kagome's personality is very humble- she wouldn't just give up her virginity unless she knew Inuyasha was the one....ok...I'm done ranting and raving. Excellent start though!!!!

This is a great story, I was reading it until it got deleted so I'm glad that it came back. Please update real soon.