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Oh god, that's a hot story!! I can,t wait for the next chapter.

Ahhh, that was so hot... speaking of showers... I think I will have one now.... a very COLD one...
So steamy, so sexy, so frigging hot that I dont know where to put my panties even...
That was the hottest I have read in a month or so... *whirls around and dont know where to go at the moment*
Yep, this little girlie is totally lost in lust... *hey that sounded like a good saying ne?* Lost in lust...
I will live on this little chapter for days to come... Ehhh I come... or something...
Ok, I'll stop now before I'm embarrassing myself here...

*stares* Sephiroth. *Passes out* *an hour later* That....... was so....... fucking........ hot. *stars in her eyes* I've never read a 'Let me masterbate in the shower' scene as hot as that one. Damn. Just. Dayummmm. *commits scene to memory* That definitely goes down on my list of favorites - 3. Sephiroth wanking in the shower, YoukaiObsessed style *bows down to THE Shower Scene Master* Sephiroth, my all-time favorite General in any scene is bound to get me interested, but the way you did it - sublime. Now everytime I read the word 'Shower' I'm going to automatically think 'SEPHIROTH'S COCK!' I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing(good for my libido, bad for other people's sanity), but you've definitely got me addicted to this story.

Oh, and wasn't Sephiroth getting Sesshomaru's license plate number? lmao I couldn't stop laughing at the idea of Sephiroth memorizing Sessha's license plate, then going to his car to jot it down with a 'dark smirk'. That conniving bastard - oh how I love him. *coos* Love this story so far, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

whew... that was hot. i'm taking a shower with sephiroth now... (hopeful, daydreaming face) i wish, ne? i wish...

this is a really great story and i can't wait for the next chapter. how hot is it? and i absolutely can not wait to see what happens next. i love hte imagry (sephiroth, dripping wet in shower, hard cock in his big hands *drooling*) and the action that goes on in your story. you have a great control of the story and i can't wait to see if sesshoumaru actually shows up, what he's going to do while studying... <<' swords (snicker)

i look forward to more from you, and learning more about their interesting relationship.

until later!
~hanyou-elf

Wow... Me likee! ^^ I don't actually even know who Sephiroth is *blush* but I really like this story... As long as this interesting Sephiroth character ends up seme, I don't care! ^^ Also, don'tdisparage your writing skills - you're*wayyyyyyyy* better than some peopel I've seen, on affn and elsewhere. So come on, more!!! ^^

damn. . .RAR!!! that was good. i liked how you mixed a little bit of "love" into that fight. that was hot. you do a really good job with the fight scenes. those are hard to do. AWESOME JOB. i love this story. its on my favorites menu. keep up the awesome work
love
Ravira

you must update more....I'm just getting into it....and the chapter ends.......ooooooooooo that pisses me off.....you shouldn't be such a damned good writer if you're gonna leave it hanging like that....but then again...if you weren't such a good writer....I wouldn't be reading this......or reviewing.....o.k. anyway, greet job!!!!!!!

Now I don't want to sound impatient............bu-ut...................YOU MUST UPDATE!!!!!!!

I found you finally; I reviewed another story of yours a few months back. I love your style of writing. I am so happy to see that you write yaoi. I am awestruck by this story. I never thought of these two as a couple before. The idea is very steamy. I love the setup in chapter 1, in chapter 2, the fight scenes are amazing, though a smidgen bloody. The chitchat between the 2 men was steamy and funny. Please have them make love in the next chapter. Update soon, if you have a update list please add me to it.

This is definitely going on my recommended.

I will stalk you now on adult fan fiction. No worries just to stalk what you write.

wow! ok first off i'm soo sorry i'm just now reviewing! (kisses) please forgive me? that said...hubba, hubba! i know this chap was all fighting but...i've never had a fight like that! sooo hot & all the yummie banter ooooo,,,,& the touchy touchy! mmmm....i love it! ur doing great hun (huggles) keep up the good work! i'm totally looking forward 2 the next chap in the shower (sigh) u know i can't wait 4 that! sephy & sess all wet & yummie ...mmm. ok i'm done now! thanks 4 sharing ur fab fic!

You updated! W00t! >XD Another great chapter you've written, very entertaining. Sexy Seshoumaru and his nonchalant behaviour, although he seemed to be getting a little riled up...hehe. And of course, who could forget the amusing Sephiroth? For some reason I find really horny Sephiroth funny. >XD Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter/update, things are really getting good! *hands out sugar, aggressive music and yaoi porn magazines - the essentials of life* Ta-ta for now!