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That was so fucking evil, I was just REALLY getting into it...and you end it! I love the story I really do....BUT THAT WAS THE WORST CLIFFIE I'VE EVER FOUND!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter, but please, have mercy on me, Cliffies make me wanna cry!

Ohh, This is looking good... You are doing a good job here...

hey, look.... this was absolutely engrossing. i love the whole chapter and i can not wait for more! i do hope you update soon. i can't wait to see what happens. i really enjoy this story and had never thought about them as a pair, but now... (drooling)

fabulous set up darling and i hope to see the follow through real soon, ne? (hint, hint)

tell me of this metal paddle... kinky lurker would like to know more... :D

great job! i can't wait to see how the... fight... will go... (hentai thoughts)

ja!
~hanyou-elf

its about damn time you put out, i mean put this out. i have waited long enough. great work bringing these 2 together.

i am looking to the future for the fight scenes you have cooked up. if i know you there will be a lot of blood.

get your sweet ass in gear and update this, or you are going over my knee, or on yours. i know i will pitch a tent when these 2 finally touch each other. (pulls out whip, get those fingers working!) …Darklord Naraku

wow! (glomps) great job youkai! i'm sooo happy u finally posted! it's fab! i love the character development & ooooh how their sizing each other up...yummie! i can't believe u stopped there! i'm ancious 4 the next chap so please update soo! (giggles) btw loved the whole human hygene thing very funny! great work hun really glad 2 see ur posting! yay 4 youkai!