rate_review Reviews

It's good so far...we will see if the next chapter is good as well...keep up the good work ^____^

Don't get me wrong, I love this fic so far and I can not wait for you to post again! But, one thing? Were you trying to rush the story to get to the main pairing? Your story has the makings of being really great, but slow down, take a deep breath, and let the story write it's self.

If you would like some help, or someone to just bounce things off of, please e-mail me.


I hope you post soon!
Darkladyd

i like it! cant wait for the next chappy!

I like it so far! Thats so harsh though how everyone kept such a secret from Kagome...even Shippo! At least Sesshie and Rin are in the picture. Hopefully, Kagome wont be so empty inside. Well update soon!! ^_^