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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok ashes i have only one thing to say to you and your lil story
i love it!! i think its going great and i hope that your hand gets better
so you can update soon!!!
its getting good so keep up the awesome work!
i love it!! i think its going great and i hope that your hand gets better
so you can update soon!!!
its getting good so keep up the awesome work!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well let me start by saying i'm sorry for reading your stroy first before reviewing but i couldn't stop reading!! absolutly great!!! i love it!!! i can not wait to read more.
and i am so sorry to hear about your hand. i wish you a quick pain free recovery!!! take care and happy spring break!!! =)
and i am so sorry to hear about your hand. i wish you a quick pain free recovery!!! take care and happy spring break!!! =)
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is fantastic! i love it but you're rigth the end chap1 isn't a ending when you can say "yeah, i must read this story to the end. i'm so excited about what can happen next." you know? but the other chaps are. so now i want to read this story to the end. please continue this story, soon.
bye bye
bye bye
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I love this Story, so Much, Keep writing~! ^_^
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it. thats about all you need to know. cant wait for your next chapter.. soon. i hope
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like some....Miruko and Sango are my other favorite couple on Inuyasha....and you have brought them out beautiful.....I can so see and hear Miruko saying all this wonderful things to Sango....It's really good....I have to see the Wedding date....Makes me wish I could find a guy that wonderful....update soon I really want more....
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One
Typically, I like a story that has a lot of action and mystery. This story is straight forward, yet intriguing. Your spelling and grammar are to be commended. However, for me, the asterisks are a bit annoying. That's just me, though. I don't think you need the astericks, but I do love the comments and wouldn't take them out for the world. I'm in the process of writing a fic that has comments and am not bothering with separating them out. My beta hasn't complained that she doesn't understand where the comments are coming from.
I really do like this story and I'm off to read the second chapter.
Hanyou Slave
Typically, I like a story that has a lot of action and mystery. This story is straight forward, yet intriguing. Your spelling and grammar are to be commended. However, for me, the asterisks are a bit annoying. That's just me, though. I don't think you need the astericks, but I do love the comments and wouldn't take them out for the world. I'm in the process of writing a fic that has comments and am not bothering with separating them out. My beta hasn't complained that she doesn't understand where the comments are coming from.
I really do like this story and I'm off to read the second chapter.
Hanyou Slave
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is too cute! And yet electrically sexy too! Awesome! Lesson 3....hmmmmm.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two
Flowers, that was so sweet. The quote on the card was just as lovely as the flowers, if not more so. For future reference (I haven't read back through your reviews), where you have placed 'defiantly', 'definitely' is the word your looking for. Just trying to help since you're already doing a near perfect job.
Hanyou Slave
Flowers, that was so sweet. The quote on the card was just as lovely as the flowers, if not more so. For future reference (I haven't read back through your reviews), where you have placed 'defiantly', 'definitely' is the word your looking for. Just trying to help since you're already doing a near perfect job.
Hanyou Slave
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three
That was a nice evening. Beginning with Sango's confession putting her in a vulnerable position leading Miroku to take charge of the situation was very interesting. You make him look like a monk with his lesson to Sango and a lecher at the same time. Very good!
Hanyou Slave
That was a nice evening. Beginning with Sango's confession putting her in a vulnerable position leading Miroku to take charge of the situation was very interesting. You make him look like a monk with his lesson to Sango and a lecher at the same time. Very good!
Hanyou Slave