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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four
Oh, I just loved the 'BOB' reference. Where did you get that one?! The inner dialogue and the conversation with Kagome was very funny and cute. Writer's block, my ass!
Hanyou Slave
Oh, I just loved the 'BOB' reference. Where did you get that one?! The inner dialogue and the conversation with Kagome was very funny and cute. Writer's block, my ass!
Hanyou Slave
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four
I enjoyed the lunch in the park. I think with Sango having been a taijiya, her being afraid of bugs doesn't quite fit...but, it is your story. Never forget that. I liked the way you paid attention to the act of caressing the pulse point on her neck and Miroku using his thumbs. I don't see that very often. For having done this overnight, you did a great job. Not saying it's perfect, but I'm impressed.
Hanyou Slave
I enjoyed the lunch in the park. I think with Sango having been a taijiya, her being afraid of bugs doesn't quite fit...but, it is your story. Never forget that. I liked the way you paid attention to the act of caressing the pulse point on her neck and Miroku using his thumbs. I don't see that very often. For having done this overnight, you did a great job. Not saying it's perfect, but I'm impressed.
Hanyou Slave
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing!! i love this story!
this is so well done, i can hardly believe it. i mean, wow.
i can't wiat to see more!
this is so well done, i can hardly believe it. i mean, wow.
i can't wiat to see more!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this fic! the characters are so adorable togather! you should be proud! and you liked my idea! hurray! i can't wait for that! miroku is the hand down king of sexy. but that scene with the bug was terrifying! ::shudder:: i LOATHE bugs. yuck yuck yuck. update soon!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am actually feeling this story and I tend not to go from M/S pairings. Great writing, plot and character development thus far
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I need more this was great
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww! so good! cant wait till the next update!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, i offically love this story! i wish kagome would call an escort service! oooooh- wait! i just got a side plot! here, use it or don't. kagome calls the escort place adn gets inu....not because he's an escort but b/c he tried to be one but being inu, he was a little too rough around the edges. so, kag expects a miroku but b/c no else can take it, she gets inu. enjoyable times ensue. i just see this being very interesting and humourous.
inu: all right!! god damn bitch, i'm #$%^&*%$#$%^&* here! strip, we'll fuck all right!??!??! LET"S GO, I DON'T HAVE ALL DAY!!!! are you $%^#$%^&^%$#%^& BRAIN DAMAGED!?!?!?!?!? JEEZ!!!
Kag: ......................oh my.............
hehehe. update soon!!
inu: all right!! god damn bitch, i'm #$%^&*%$#$%^&* here! strip, we'll fuck all right!??!??! LET"S GO, I DON'T HAVE ALL DAY!!!! are you $%^#$%^&^%$#%^& BRAIN DAMAGED!?!?!?!?!? JEEZ!!!
Kag: ......................oh my.............
hehehe. update soon!!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its a great fic. keep working on it please.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good! and yeah! that movie was really good! <3!!!